Just finished up the cover for that Rock Johnson story I played around with last year.
I essentially rewrote the entire story to be much much better, and tighter. And yeah, had to raise the price from 25 cents to 75, sorry about that. Darn inflation!
I am not sure I will do anything with this. I might share with a few friends, more of a fun creative exercise than anything else, but I had a blast doing it.
Remove the comma after Enigma Tome on your back cover. That should be a single sentence without punctuation.
ReplyDeleteConsider: Explosions, Betrayal. Brutality. If you eliminate the word "fistfights" from your impact message, you can utilize "fight his way out" instead of "punches" later.
Chop off the "He's" and carry the same Explosions, etc. motif from before: Alone. Outgunned. Outnumbered. As above you are repeating the well-chosen power chords of a killer intro such as Back in Black. Repeating it/them builds the motif a la the repeated riff in Enter Sandman.
For your consideration.
The fact that you began a work and finished it is worthy of money. How do I find this composition, and pay for it?
Hey! Thanks for the feedback! I truly appreciate it. After I posted this, I went back and looked at it later and actually realized a few of the mistakes you pointed out, so those will be fixed before “going to print”.
Deletei’m actually still trying to decide what I want to do with it. I was toying with the idea of doing a small print run from home and selling them for a couple bucks, Leaning on the DIY printed home market, but I may just throw it up on Kindle for a buck and see if anybody actually buys it